you asked me
if I was fine
but what would you’ve done
if I was not?
things going on inside my head
like a bat out of hell
which makes me sometimes
an unfeeling swine
but I chose to keep
my mouth shut
even though I had
a lot to tell
you think
you know me well
but there is so much
inside of me
a lot more I could never tell!
a lot more you could never see!
103 replies on “A Lot More – A Poem”
So true!!!! And very well penned!! There’s so much inside us!
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Thank you, Ashee. Indeed. We never know what someone is going through. Even if they can’t share their pain with us, we can surely share some love and kindness with them. 💕 Have a great day!🤗
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You too 😄😄
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Ahhhh….i love this…lovely
“but what would you’ve done
if I was not?”… this is my favorite line
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Thank you, Mich. I hope you’re doing well.🤗
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I am Ara😉😉
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Beautiful words 💕
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Thank you so much. Take care.😊
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Nice lines with a beautiful drawing
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Thank you. Have a good day! 🥰
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Same to you 😊
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Hi Arati: I like the question you pose in your poem: What would you have done if I was not fine? Nice poem. Yes, we keep so much inside. Great drawing showing the two positions of the head with different expressions. Done this way makes it much more interesting than a two separate drawings. Have a great day.
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Thank you, Chris. I like how you look at things in a detail and try to give a good explanation about it, be it on your blogs or in a comment. Take care. 🙂
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Thank you. That’s a nice compliment. 😊
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Beautiful and true words. Well written 👍💚
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Thank you so much.😊
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You’re welcome 😊
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Is that your sketch, Aarti?😅😅
It’s amazing and the notes you penned!! What can I say ‘Bout it?!?!😀😀
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Haha, might be. It could be mine, yours or anyone else’s, who knows? It doesn’t matter which gender I chose to portray, it’s all about the emotion that it reflects, isn’t it? 😉
Anyway, thank you.😊
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No no maybe you take me wrong…😅😅
I asked is that your creation? You done it by yourself, 😅😅
Absolutely, it reveals all the emotions very well though!!🙂🙂
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Oh, I’m so sorry. A small misunderstanding, haha. I really thought you were asking me jokingly. 🙃
And yeah, I had drawn it myself.
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Haha, no worries.. 🤗🙂
Life is all about to make mistakes and then to amend it, right?😅😅
Well that’s so creative u are!!!😄😄
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Yes, indeed. Thanks. 🙃
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If you’re not then you’ll be just fine soon. The Artwork expresses so much!
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That’s so nice of you!
I’m absolutely fine, it was just a poem. Thank you 🙂
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Very well indeed 💙
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Thank you.🤗
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Good lines, beautiful
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Thank you.😊
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Always welcome
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This is so beautifully written and extremely true there’s so much going on inside all of us. 😊
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Thank you so so much.
Take care.💕
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Welcome dear. You too☺️
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Beautifully penned 😊🙏and interesting drawing ✍️….keep up the good work friend..
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate you saying that. Take care. 😊
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Pleasure is all mine ✅keep writing ✍️ 😊
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Nicely penned with deep meaning 🤗
Your art is awesome 💯😇
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Thank you. Have a great day!😊
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Very welcome 🤗
Same to you 😇
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Sing it out or shout it out,
The choice is yours,
Words like to dance,
Sing it out,
Your words will love,
To dance to your song,
The choice is yours!!
Thanks for sharing.
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🤗💕
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Wonderful 👍
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Thank you.😊
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Oh my….this is such a beautiful & relatable poem…simply amazing lines
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Thank you so much for your kind words. 🤗
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You’re welcome Arati ✨
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So true feelings, but it’s always better to speak out you heart and feelings to someone trustworthy,🤗🤗
Btw sketch is amazing.. You have got great skills👏👏
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Yes, of course. Having someone trustworthy to share your feelings is indubitably a blessing from God. 😊
And thank you for your kind words. 💕
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Congratulations and thank you a lot for nominating me. I have submitted my nomination as well. Thanks.💕
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Thank you.
And you’re absolutely welcome. I’ll check out your post soon.🤗
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It’s alright. Thanks.💕💕
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Good post, I ever wait your post
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Thank you.🥺🤗
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Can i just take a moment and appreciate how beautiful and sad that picture is! I am staring at it for a while, and I just can understand the pain ✨
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Thank you dear. So many of us hide our emotions behind us, still nobody knows what one must be going through.❤
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Yess! 😞
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We thinker know there world but when you consider that there’s a world within each one and that there are almost 8 billion of us then… well, my mind is boggled just thinking about it! 🙂
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Well, don’t think too much.😉 Have a great day! 🤗
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You too. 🙂
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Beautifully written, 🤗
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Thank you so much.❤
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What can I say except this poem is of mesmerizing beauty, sizzling appeal, *&* dazzling rapture that captures the Imagination!
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Thank you.🤗
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I am smiling as I am mile-ing!
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You’re such a great writer that even your drawing speaks🙄❤
More power to you🤩♾
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Thank you so so much. I hope you are doing well.❤️
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I’m good😌❤
Welcome❤
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I feel and understand your pain.
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❤
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“but what would you’ve done
if I was not?”
Best left unasked
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❤
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What a post, something we can all take from and see ourselves in. Some of it is quite grim, but much of it is as beautiful as a gorgeous sunrise. Thanks for writing and thanks for reading this.
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Thank you so much.😊
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The poem in itself and the drawing accompanying it is awesome…you managed to bring out two emotions of the same person amazingly well!
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Thank you so much.🤗🙏
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The words and sketch go really well. I loved the sketch!
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Thank you so much. Take care.
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Well penned piece. It’s good to connect with you and thank you for following Eugi’s Causerie I.
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Thank you, and you are absolutely welcome. Take care.
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Thanks for these words.
Merci pour ces mots
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❤️❤️
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This is wonderful, keep up the good work. Also, thank you for following my blog. 🙂
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Thank you.😊
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Well described inner feeling from both poetry and sketch 🙂 a soothing piece of art.
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Thank you so much.😊
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Artwork goes well with this verse. Have a wonderful day.
Art
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Thank you.🤗
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True words 🤗
Loved the way of your thinking 💖
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Thank you so much.❤
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🤗
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I also drew that….but yours is so much more amazing🥺❤️
Great post😍
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Thank you so much dear, it was one of my very first attempts…❤ I would love to see yours.🤗
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Oooo mine is here!
tarushispeaks.com/2020/05/31/ideal-inspiration-award%f0%9f%98%ac-2/
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Couldn’t open…
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https://tarushispeaks.com/2020/05/31/ideal-inspiration-award%f0%9f%98%ac-2/
This might work!
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Yeah, this worked. You’ve drawn it beautiful too.🤗
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Beautiful, heart touching poem! Your piece rings true and I can relate! Also, I love the drawing!
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Aw, thank you.
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You’re so welcome. 🙂
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So true…
We all have many things that we keep buried deep inside us and do not let them out or maybe we feel the lack of words or something to express it fully
Well written📝
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Thank you.💕💕💕
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Very nice. I can relate.
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