You and I-
Under the sky,
Beneath the trees:
Holding the hands,
Unwilling to leave!
My heart is full,
Singing with the birds-
The sweet melodies!
My soul is filled
With a very clear,
Yet so strange emotion-
Dancing in the breeze!
Even the barren land
Has ceased to grieve;
The sky that was dull,
The thunder so loudly heard,
The rain, and those mournful cries
Have now widely grinned;
And pricked up the ears,
Willing to hear our unvoiced notion!
You and I…You and I…
Under the sky,
Looking at our spirit
Reflected in our eyes!
Embracing the love
That never dies!
You and I…You and I…
@20/09/2020

224 replies on “You and I – A Poem”
Beautiful 😍
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Beautiful poem! Heartfelt! ❤ All the best! Cheryl
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Thank you so much.♥️
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Wow this was so touching and beautiful!
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You’re welcome!
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What a beautiful poem💙. I really love to read it.
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get a hotel room seeing where the pillow talk creating love poems carry you and the one you love
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This is a priceless poem and when you incorporated a selection of your poems in a manuscript for a book let this poem be your debut to begin dazzling the world with your poetry making it drizzle then pick up and let the rain of your creations pour!
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Thank you. You have always been so kind.
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Nice blog !
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Decent feelings of love. Well expressed! Beautiful
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That was a beautiful poem and a beautiful picture. Nice to meet you😸Pawkisses for a wonderful day🐾😽💞
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Thank you so much. Nice to meet you too. 💛
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Such beautiful lines! I got chills ❤️ Not so big fan of priyanka and aayushman though! 😅
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Thank you. ♥️ Ha ha! Neither am I. But I love Priyanka for taking the Nepali cinema to another level. This picture is lovely though. 😄
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Yes, The picture is lovely, no doubt about that! ❤️
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🙂♥️
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Amazing….
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Thank you so much. Have a great day!🤍
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Really nice
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How beautiful!
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Such a lovely thought
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Perfect poem those with romantic hearts. Perfect for me💘
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Wonderfully penned ❤
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such a beautiful poem! and lovely picture too 😉
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Thank you so much.😊
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I love your lovely poetries, most of your poetries can be turned into sweet melodies and that is the magic of your writing.
Keep writing!!🙌😇
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Aw, thank you.
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Excellent poem! 🙏🌺🤗🌹
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much.💛
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Gaaahh, thank you for supporting me and appreciating my content!
This literally means so much to me!!! :3
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My pleasure. 😊
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Hi Arati! Thanks a lot for choosing to follow my blog! I’m so grateful for your support.
I look forward to reading more great posts from you! 🙂
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My pleasure. 😊
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Beautifully writen
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awesome post.
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Fantafabulous❤❤
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Thank you.🤗
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Beautiful poem ❤️
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The rhythm and repetition of your poem are quite captivating. As a woman married to the same wonderful man for 58 years and counting… I especially appreciated the sentiment here!
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Thank you so much. Glad to hear that!❤
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Beautiful and so well written ✨
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This poem is very nice!
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Hi aratibanstola!
Thanks a lot for following Suitcase Travel blog!
Your poem is beautiful. I very enjoyed !
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Thank you.
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Lovely poem
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Thank you.
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Thank you for capturing such a wonderful moment in words. The beauty of a relationship of any kind is worth taking the time to cherish. 😊
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Thank you.
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Enthralling 🤗
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Beautiful. Thanks for following my blog.
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Very nice and full of hope!
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Thank you.😊
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Omg this is lovelyyy😍😍😍❤
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Thank you. ♥️
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My great pleasure 🥰
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Even the barren land
Has ceased to grieve;
Nice lines
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Thank you.🤗
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Great
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This is lovely!!!😍😍
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Beautiful!!!
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Oh wow …simply beautiful 💕
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