
I wanna see the world with you;
But when I see you, I see the world in you!
Broken, shattered, crushed, betrayed;
But still it’s my world, and it’s beautiful!
It’s beautiful not because of the eyes that I’m looking into,
Nor is it because of the way I’m looking at it;
But still it’s beautiful. And it’s my world.
My world that I love to spend my life on,
My world that I love to give my life for, too.
Because it’s beautiful. And it’s my world.
When I see you, I remember the last slice of pizza that I ate last week.
The one that I loved the most;
The one that I found hard to swallow as well!
Not because it wasn’t yummy,
But because I didn’t want to finish it.
I don’t remember how it tasted like,
But I will never forget how it set it’s seal on my taste buds.
When I see you, the air around me seems to stand still.
But it’s not just about the air!
Everytime I see you, my heart stops and I become speechless.
But I know, I know that
This heart will love you till my last breath.
But you are my last breath, right?
When I see you, I wanna write poetry about love.
Because you are like those poems I would never stop writing about;
Nor will I ever get tired of it!
Anyway, did I tell you I wanna see the world with you?
But when I see you, I see the world in you!
Maybe because my world revolves around you,
Or is it because you are my world?
Anyway, when I see you, I see the world in you!
And that’s true.
Because I love you.
And will always do.
76 replies on “When I See You – A Poem”
Thank you for the beautiful poem!
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A beautiful and passionate declaration of love, Arati 🌹.
I believe that the man to whom these verses are addressed will never be able to leave you!
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Thank you so much. That’s so kind of you. Have a gread day ahead! ❤
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A lovely heartfelt poem, Arati! ❤ Beautiful photo.
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Thank you so much, Cheryl. Have a great day ahead! ❤
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Beautifully penned 💟💟
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Beautiful
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Very nice write up poem.!👌
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Thank you so much!,🌹
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Wonderful poetry! Thank you!
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I’m amazed💛 A really beautiful poem
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Thank you so much. That’s so kind of you.❤
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Thank you so much. Have a great day ahead! ❤
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Always a pleasure to read and share great posts with followers, My Friend!! Have a great day!
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The poem is mind catching *&* profound!
“Poetrey
Has Its own Country!”_-Van Prince
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Thank you so much.😊
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You got talent!
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When *I See You* I will create a 1-of-a-kind “Poem* in your honor
gift-wrapped in congrats!
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BEAUTIFUL! 🙏🏻♥️
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Thank you so much.❤
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you.😊
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i fully enjoyed the poem.
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Thank you. Glad to hear that!
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a simple perfect line, love it.
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Very nice
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A passionate love.deep and pure love.as you feel in love most beautifully,who can apart from the touch of love.you are most lucky,my dear arati❤️
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Most welcome,my dear!!🌹❤🌹
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Great work. Keep it up 👍
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Beautiful poetry 😀
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Very moving and soulful, peace
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Wonderful poem, thank you for sharing so much richness!
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This is absolutely beautiful, thank you for sharing ⭐️⭐️
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Beautiful poetry
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Your welcome dear
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Lovely poem⚘️
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When I see you, I remember the last slice of pizza that I ate last week. 😁😄😅😊🥰🤗😍
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Nice
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A lovely start to a new day. Thank you for stopping by my blog.
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Lovely!
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Beautiful poem!
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